The technology seems realistic and not too far into future. Or perhaps originated from a different path that started not too long ago. In SciFi, I find that the human interaction, emotions, and feelings created around the "new, futuristic" technology is more important. You have done a great job bringing this human emotion and feeling into the story. All very natural. I want to know more about this world and story!
The technology seems realistic and not too far into future. Or perhaps originated from a different path that started not too long ago. In SciFi, I find that the human interaction, emotions, and feelings created around the "new, futuristic" technology is more important. You have done a great job bringing this human emotion and feeling into the story. All very natural. I want to know more about this world and story!